Brave Beowulf boiling in anger
wanting to waiste wild Grendel
sailing salty seas seeking for revenge
coward grendel only came out in the cold nights
the time wouldn't matter Beowulf would be there waiting.
A grosome night beowulf grew inpatient to fight grendel he waited in the great hall to hell as they say god must decide who will be given to deaths cold grip
There'll be nothing to moon over,
no corps to prepare for its grave
If death does take me, send the hammered
mail of my armor to hero higlac
Grendel knew that now he was going to meet someone
whose hands where harder
will men beat the beast let the best men win....
10 comments:
iralo el pepon ! i like your poem! and the pic i like how you describe it and how you try to make it up and you did not coppy most of the words from the story! nice job
PEPON I LOVE THAT U DESCRIBE HOW BEOWULF WANTED TO GET REVENGE SO BAD..HOW HE FELT ABOUT GRENDEL..GOOD JOB!!!!
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HEY PEPON I REALLY LIKE THE WAY U EXPRESS YOUR SELF TOWARDS BEWOULF... YOUR POEM IS BETTA THAN MINE LMAO BUT I TRY HARD SO NOW COMMENT MI POEM PLZ =) LOL KEEP UP WITH GOOD POEM TALLENTS LMAO MAY B YOU WILL HELP MEH 2 WRITE BETTER POEMS AIGHT LOVE BABY LAZZY =)
yo dude it was like a tongue twister where you put....salty seas seeking for revenge.....it was funny....i studdered a few times....i liked your poem it was sexy...lol....you did a good ass job....you were accurate of your writing...keep it up bro....peace in chicken greace
LOOK AT U PEPON LOL I LIKE UR POEM ITS REALLY NICE PEPON I LIKE HOW U WROT IT LOL KEEP DA NICE WORK GOOD JOB
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homeboi i knew u got that poetry in u lol well i read it already in class bcus i was there so yea its awsome bro i like u kno wat im sayin lol keep it up ira jessica muy chida lol her poem was cool 2 mine sucks man
i like your poem, i also like the way u use alliteration... i like how u are describing beowulf by saying that he's reday to battle: meaning that hes not afraid of anythin and ready to challenge!
HEY I LIKE UR POEM. KEEP UP DA GOOD JOB. ITS REALLY COOL ANS I HOPE U COMMENT BACK . LATERZ... NAENAE
Damn!! you snap....I really liked your poem it was just what Ms.Diaz was asking for. You have strong words and frases. Which make clear sence. Good job your poem was really well done.
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